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Blood Love Under The Moonlight
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Blood Love Under The Moonlight
by: Jonathan Marsolais
Blood escapes your lips
As I bit into it, knowing I couldn't resist
I swallowed the blood, a taste so alluring
I knew I couldn't leave
Under thr moonlight sky
We shared our love
Blood flowing out of our rose lips
From the bite we each delivered
The rose bushes which surrounded us
Only helped to hide us from prying eyes
Who would rather tear us apart
Than see us together like this
We sit together under the moonlit sky
Blood partaken by both our lips
The crimson now tainting our lips
The colour of roses
And though I wish we could show our love
We both know what that would bring us
So we shall meet on the next full moon
Under the moonlight sky
Then we will consume our once more
by: Jonathan Marsolais
Blood escapes your lips
As I bit into it, knowing I couldn't resist
I swallowed the blood, a taste so alluring
I knew I couldn't leave
Under thr moonlight sky
We shared our love
Blood flowing out of our rose lips
From the bite we each delivered
The rose bushes which surrounded us
Only helped to hide us from prying eyes
Who would rather tear us apart
Than see us together like this
We sit together under the moonlit sky
Blood partaken by both our lips
The crimson now tainting our lips
The colour of roses
And though I wish we could show our love
We both know what that would bring us
So we shall meet on the next full moon
Under the moonlight sky
Then we will consume our once more
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with the theme of blood roses and moolight. I have hopes that I have not failed her in this endeavour. This, by the way, is also my very first request since joining dA. I am in an ecstatic mood!!!
with the theme of blood roses and moolight. I have hopes that I have not failed her in this endeavour. This, by the way, is also my very first request since joining dA. I am in an ecstatic mood!!! © 2010 - 2024 EngelSeele
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So this is where it started , eh?
(After reading your comments)
Anyways...
I am sad to say, I'm not to fond of this one due to the vampirish thing going on, on it. Yeah... not a fan of those things.
But the las 2 stanzas, I liked, for forbidden love makes for good writing material, I believe.
Overall, it's pretty good. I just hope this doesn't lead to more....
(After reading your comments)
Anyways...
I am sad to say, I'm not to fond of this one due to the vampirish thing going on, on it. Yeah... not a fan of those things.
But the las 2 stanzas, I liked, for forbidden love makes for good writing material, I believe.
Overall, it's pretty good. I just hope this doesn't lead to more....